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  1. 2008/10/17 Task2-[Cambrige 5 test 1]
  2. 2008/10/17 Task1-Cambrige IELTS 5 test2
  3. 2008/10/14 WRITING TASK1
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In some of the countries, the universities should receive same numbers of man and women students in every subject. Some people say that we all should have same opportunity when they choose something, although others disagree with them. I think in my country, it is not accepted right now and I also agree with Koreans university policy.

 

At first, if we accept equal number of male and female students, it will make other problems, because universities only can receive limited students each subject every year, although there are so many high school candidates who want to study the subject at the university. So it is true, if we choose same number of man and women students, some of the high school students get lose their chance to go. Secondly, in cases of some subjects like nursing or military academic demand to receive one of gender students more then others. As you know all military academic accept more male students in Korea, because they need strong physical ability as long as their intelligence when they graduate. That is why academic militaries want to accept male students more.

 

In conclusion, I do not agree to choose same numbers of male and female students in every subject. There are various situations in each subject so it will not accepted if we always have to receive same man and women students.

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As can be see, first bar chart shows the main reasons for study amonh students of various age groups between under 26 and over 49, while the second chart explains the percent of the supported students from employers by ages.

 

The first bar chart illustrates that the reasons for study according to age of student from under 26 to over 49. In generally, most of young students study for interest by 80% but as the time flows, the percentage of that decreased form 80 to under 20, although the number of the students who study for career went up according to gain there age. From the second chart, around 60 percentage of the under 26 students supported time off and help with fees from employers. The percentage of employer support decreasd whe students are 30-39 years old, and then the chart rose slightly. [words-143]

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The line graph shows that the percentage of the population aged 65 and over
from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden and USA. The figures reveal that the proportion of the population aged 65 and over in 2040 is much higher than in 1940.

There was gradual increased in Sweden and USA between 1940 and 1980, while the usa line graph shows declined from 1980 to 2020 and the sweden graph rosed dramatically the same period.
In the case of japan, there was small decreased from 1940 to 1960. In 1960, japan's line graph reached at the lowest point and then remainde steady between 1960 and about 1990, although there was a sharp increase in japan between 2030 and 2040  from 10 to 25 persentage.

The three countries graphs reached a peak in 2040.


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